Hopless Romantic123

I don't know who long I can keep this up. :smt011

LOL!! :lol: No problem. I do kind of look like and ant eater, but I'm glad that you figured I am a bear. Good luck on the re-write! You seem ...

There seems to be a smile face war going on here! :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock:

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OK, so not a bad story. I got the point and the plot pretty well. The only thing that I would really say is that almost not enough imagination went ...

It's rare that I read a piece of work with such vivid descriptions for a characters surroundings. I loved how you compared the characters thoughts to feelings and nature! Very ...

I love the fact that you took one of you favorite plots from one of your favorite movies and continued it. I love doing the same thing every time I ...

What I see is that like in most poetry, the whole thing is never supposed to make sense, unless the writers intentions are for his/her poem to be received that ...

Thanks for your crit.! I really appreciate it!

Over all a very nice job. The story seemed to have a good plot and it was obvious that the climax was clear. I agree with the fact the the ...

I agree with Night Mistress. It did catch my attention, however, I'm not happy with where the story is going. Even for just a "preview", I feel as though more ...

Hey guys! This is the first story I'll be posting and I really would like, and need you criticism! Please let me know if it is good and what needs ...

Over all I thought your story is well done. My comment to you is not so much about your story, but rather the comments posted before. You mentioned that you ...

Wonderfully done! I have just re-posted your poem with my own little side comments. Please don't take offence to any suggestions, they are just my thoughts. Trying to make it ...

I agree! Personaly, I love reading books that are just for entertainment. However, sometimes, I find myself haveing a really hard time even finding a good book.